Unbelievable music video (rough cut)

This is the rough draft and not the actual finished version of the music video and as such it will have a few problems and error here and there. We displayed this rough draft to other students during class time in order to get some feedback, the main feedback that we got was positive however we did also get some negative, the positives included good use of editing and camera positioning as well as the fact that the other students liked the use of nature and children's toys in order to give off that fun childhood vibe. There were some negatives however such as the lip synching not matching up properly and the shadows of the camera man being visible in the background, i think that the music video is coming along nicely however there are quite a few improvements which could be made.